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First thing I noticed when I look at this photo is the great focus and the crisp detail.
Yet, the problem I have with that is the depth of field. Its a bit too small because it seems 2-3 water droplets are the subject. The green backround next to the water seems to be the focus point leaving the droplets a little blurry.
The photo is very interesting because of the soft backround and perfectly oval droplets. While that is pretty, its not something you can really get lost in.
Overall this photo is well done composition wise that draws your eye in but struggles to keep it there.
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Wow, i liked this picture a lot to be honest.
The fact that it's a rather unblemished leaf with well positioned water droplets speaks of the patience and effort put into creating this macro piece.

While it was a good portrayal of a leading path down the leaf to the core, i believe in this case, an increased depth of field could have made it better because of the need to emphasise the rest of the water droplets and not just this one in front of us.

Otherwise, I believe it's a great piece with texture. Definitely not the most unique one i've seen, but definitely enough to hold it's own.
What do you think?
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:iconbokehstan:
bokehstan Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Sweet capture! :)
Great image :)
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BlueRose00 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Hi! This deviation is featured, look and fave here: [link] :heart:
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Isefisk Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Aw, thank you :love:
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BlueRose00 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Welcome :aww:
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Glasperlenspielerin Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2010
This impressive photo has been featured in the “recent favs” category in my previous journal: [link]
:)
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Isefisk Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you so much :love:
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P3dy Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I really love the velvet-like texture of the leaf :) Lovely work, congrats :)
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:iconisefisk:
Isefisk Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you so much, I appreciate it a lot :hug:
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DontWorryItsJustMe Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2009
:O
**Fav'ed**
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DanikaMilles Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Love the angle and the detail
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:iconisefisk:
Isefisk Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you! :love: :hug:
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DanikaMilles Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Your welcome
:bump:
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HarlowPhotography Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Featured [link] :heart:
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Isefisk Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you so much! :love:
:hug:
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EchoRukia Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2009  Professional Photographer
your work has been featured for being a beautifully unique piece. be aware that i also :+fav:'d this piece! :evillaughter: ... told you like loved your piece. :giggle:

here's where it's featured! [link] now go brag about it! :la:
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:iconisefisk:
Isefisk Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Aw, thank you so much for the feature and the :+fav: :blowkiss:
Really appreciate it!! :love:
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:iconechorukia:
EchoRukia Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2009  Professional Photographer
i hope you enjoy browsing through the others who were featured! :)
and you're VERY welcome. you deserved it. your work is stunning. :la:
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Isefisk Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Absolutly :) Already faved one of them :) A lot of beautiful art :)
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EchoRukia Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2009  Professional Photographer
ah, awesome! did you fav anymore?
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Skinno-1 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2009
Oh wow i adore this shot! :) Beautiful lines on the leaf and the trail of water droplets is amazing, such a great piece of work! :aww:
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Isefisk Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you so much :blowkiss:
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angsty-love Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2009  Student Writer
I love the texture of this photo.
The natural bumps of the leaf look great in contrast with the drops of water.
Good work!!
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Isefisk Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you so much :love:
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Slayer-1412 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2009  Student General Artist
kinda like footprints :wow:
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Isefisk Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
ouh, I haven't thought about that before. You're right! It looks like somekind of footprints.


Thank you for the :+fav: btw :blowkiss:
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Slayer-1412 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2009  Student General Artist
no problem :D
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teyasaveleva Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
wow, stunning shot!
I like the way you arranged composition and focus on this one! :clap:
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Isefisk Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you!
This picture is one of my personal favorites in my gallery. :love:
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Date Taken
Jun 20, 2009, 1:01:54 PM
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